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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 5:37 am

Desdmeona blinked. "Please don't touch me there," She told Donva. "It's very sore." Her voice sounded hollow. She was suddenly standing. Then, she did something no Irken would even imagine to do.
She started to tear off her pak.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 02, 2008 5:41 am

"Stop it!" Donva cried, starting to panic. He tried to restrain her, pulling her arms away from where they could do any damage.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:04 am

She sent out a wave of emotions. The feeling of pure loathing filled the room. It was thick, so thick, that if it were a type of gas, you would certainly choke on it.
Desdemona did this, all the while clawing away at her pak, wincing at the pain she was giving herself.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:14 am

Donva gasped at the feeling of loathing which was filling the room. But he still tried to stop the girl.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:25 am

Finally, Desdemona stopped and stared up at him. Her eyes were filled with hatred, not towards Donva but towards herself. "I'm a monster. Why are you even near me?" She screamed. "Don't you know you could get infected. No," She shook her head, her antennas flat against it. "You already are." She told him, her voice soft and full of regret.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:39 am

"I don't care!" Donva shouted. "I just don't care anymore." His voice was tired and hoarse. "Just don't hurt yourself, please..."
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:43 am

"No, no!" Desdemona cried. "I'm the reason! I'm the reason!" She went back to clawing uselessly at her pak until her fingers bled.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 02, 2008 6:58 am

"You're the reason for what?" he shouted, frustraited that she was making so little sense.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:03 am

"The reason! The reason for-" SNAP! The sound echoed throughout the room. She did it. With a final breath, she fell limp on the ground, the pak hanging by a few useless wires.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:11 am

Donva knelt down beside her body, too tired even to cry. He was ready to give up. He'd fought for so long...
Shana wandered in, saw the situation, then turned around and ran off to find Varius.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:12 am

A smile played across her lips. The last emotion she had felt was victory.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:16 am

Shana ran up to Varuis, sobbing. "She's dead! She's dead. I think, I think..." she trailed off, not wanting to even think what she was thinking. Donva had killed Desdemona.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:26 am

"What?" Varius asked, staring at her curiously.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:36 am

Shana took several deep breaths, her body shaking with horror, shock and sobs. "Desdemona is dead," she told him, staring at the floor. "and I think my brother killed her."
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:40 am

"Is her pak in tact?" Varius asked calm yet urgently.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:45 am

"I don't know. There's wires sticking out of her, just come on!" Shana grabbed Varius's hand and dragged him off.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sun Mar 02, 2008 7:52 am

Varius didn't pull away, only followed.
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Post  Crying Angel on Mon Mar 03, 2008 5:20 am

Shana lead him to the room where Donva was kneeling, still, next to Desdemona's still form.
Shana shook even harder, her body convulsing.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:10 am

"What did you do?" Varius asked coldly.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:36 am

Donva didn't answer, he could't, he just shook his head, not looking up.
"Donva, answer him!" Shana shouted.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Wed Mar 05, 2008 2:45 am

Varius waited, his patience slowly ebbing away.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:17 am

"She... She killed herself," he whispered hoarsely. Donva still didn't move. He just sat there.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Thu Mar 06, 2008 3:12 am

"Is the pac in tact?" Varius asked, stealing a glance at Shana.
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Post  Crying Angel on Thu Mar 06, 2008 6:01 am

"I don't know," Donva said softly. He couldn't bear to look at the remains of the PAK.
Shana just looked embarrassed and unsure. It was Donva's word against a corpse's; Desdemona was the only other one who was there.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:39 pm

Varius walked over, staring at the carcass with a mixture of pain and relief. He lifted the pak up as it sparked, the wires pulling out of Desdemona's back.
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Post  Crying Angel on Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:54 am

"Is she intact?" Shana asked, peering over Varius's shoulder at the PAK anxiously.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:08 am

"Minimal damage...," Varius told her, staring down at the thing in his hands. His claws clenched around it. "Make a new body." He hissed, glaring down at Donva.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sat Mar 08, 2008 6:20 am

Donva looked horrified. "What? Do you mean clone her?" he asked, alarmed.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sat Mar 08, 2008 5:30 pm

"I don't care! This body is useless, it's been torn up so much." Varius said, nudging the body of Desdemona with his boot. Irkens didn't believe that their bodies meant anything other than height. It's the pak that you should always care about.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:53 am

Donva though about his options. He could clone a body. It would take a little while and a few tries, but it was certainly better than the other option he could think of. Which was replacing another Irken's PAK with Desdemona's.
"I just don't know if I can," he admitted.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:02 am

"Look, it doesn't really matter how long it takes!" Varius roared. "As long as you fix what you have done!"
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Post  Crying Angel on Mon Mar 10, 2008 7:23 am

"What do you mean, what I have done?" Donva asked desperately. "I was trying to save her! But where were you?" He was standing, facing the boy by this point.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Mon Mar 10, 2008 12:40 pm

Varius didn't answer. He just stood there, shaking. "Well," He finally said, "are you going to fix it?"
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:48 am

Donva rubbed his face tiredly. "I'll try," he said, eventually. "Just go, make yourself scarce. I need to work." Shana turned to leave. "I want to talk to you for a moment, Shana."
She knew she was probably in trouble for overreacting. With a sigh, she doubled back and faced her older brother.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Wed Mar 12, 2008 11:38 pm

Varius nodded and turned away, giving one last glance at the girls limp body. He sighed and walked off.
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Post  Crying Angel on Thu Mar 13, 2008 12:25 am

Donva watched him go. "Shana. This guy is dangerous. I want you to take my ship and fly away from here very fast. I don't want you to tell me where you've goone, just dissappear for a while." He gave the keys to his sister. "Go. Now."
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Thu Mar 13, 2008 9:28 pm

((Donva is evil. Dx ))
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Post  Crying Angel on Sat Mar 15, 2008 5:53 am

(Donva isn't evil, he's just looking out for his little sister. What would you do? This guy you don't even know has just probably killed several people, he's demanding you bring someone back to life, who knows what he'd do? He could be dangerous, and there's no point in both of you being in danger and possibly getting killed. I'd send my sibling away too. If I had one DX)
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:14 am

((._. You're right. Just pick up to where Shana answers him.))
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Post  Crying Angel on Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:29 am

Shana took the keys. She nodded, but didn't want to leave. Not really. There was a time, it seemed like an eternity ago, when she wouldn't even had questioned Donva's orders. But that time was gone. She strode out of the room to find Varius.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:31 am

She found him sitting at a table, spinning a coin absentmindedly. He looked up, his eyes tired. "I'm sorry." He told her.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:48 am

"For what?" she asked, her voice casual and inquisitive while a small voice in the back corner of her mind spouting warnings like a fountain.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sat Mar 15, 2008 6:51 am

"I don't even know anymore. I feel so stupid for believing that I could help someone. That someone needed my help." He told her, his voice pained.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:04 am

Shana frowned. Stepped closer. "Who did you think needed your help?" Closer.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:11 am

"Who else other than Desdemona..., and you." Varius cast his eyes downward. "I'm so useless."
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Post  Crying Angel on Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:19 am

The little voice that had been warning her not long ago was now urging her to go hug him. She did. "I wouldn't say useless. Now Aika, she's useless - " the little monkey appeared and smacked Shana in the head, then vanished again. " - but not you."
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:25 am

Varius chuckled a little. "Trust me, Aika is far from useless." He said, thinking about earlier that day. "Do you think he will create another body?" Varius asked sadly.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:34 am

"Maybe. Probably." Shana though for a moment. "I honestly don't know. Before, maybe, I could have told you; I used to know him so well. But then this thing happened at this work, and he came back with more than a limp. He's been different." She shrugged, whatever whisper of maturity that had been showing though shrugged off too.
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Post  DOOMEH_DOOM on Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:55 am

He just nodded.
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Post  Crying Angel on Sat Mar 15, 2008 12:23 pm

Shana looked at him with a slight smile. "Look, I'm sure it'll be okay. She'll be back, Donva won't just leave her. Even if he won't bring her back for you, he'll bring her back for him. He's a scientist. They can't resist playing god." An old phrase she had learnt from Donva, one that held no other meaning for the girl than the gentle mockery of Donva's proffesion.
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