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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:55 am

Sun and Moon looked at each other and put their hands in the middle along with Demon's hand.
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Post  Thorn on Wed Nov 21, 2007 5:58 am

" me that for shure" said Raven with proud
and then a second hand shoot in.... it was Shadow
"and me too, dont think i would miss out on this" he said
Raven always looked up at Shadow for he always looked after him he felt safer with him here
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:01 am

Demon smiled and nodded at Shadow.
"Be careful. Spread the word quietly. We are going to get out. But it needs some planning," she said as she saw a whitecoat barging towards her.
Next thing she knew
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:05 am

Sun saw Demon drop into the whitecoat's arms. She new she needed help. Moon grabbed onto the whitecoat's arm and Sun grabbed a Trank. She stabbed it into the whitecoat. He dopped onto the groud. Sun and Moon picked Demon up and took her to somewhere safe.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:09 am

Only to find their way blocked by four more whitecoats! They were weilding tranks dangerously, like weapons. Of course, tranks were weapons.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:11 am

Sun saw Moon get knocked out, then Raven then everything blanked out, she had been tranked.

Shadow seemed to be no threat.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:22 am

Both Moon and Sun were now tranked.
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Post  Thorn on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:31 am

(ok now i no wats happening)
Shadow watched as his brother and friends where draged away.
he hurd the croud muttering insults towards them
"well thats going to make things difficult" he mutters to him self
he hands a note to one of his only freinds and hurrys after his brother.
they where all being taken to different places.
........ his friend opend the note it read ' where getting out of hear tell as many people as you can. we will see the out side world again"
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:37 am

(K)

Demon woke up strapped to a bed. She knew her limbs were going to be way painful, because the whitecoat had given her too much trank. Her head was pounding, her heart was racing and it was slightly difficult to breathe.
"Hello?" she whispered, her voice hoarse.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:39 am

Sun managed to whisper out "Hello, is that you Demon."
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:41 am

"Yes. Who is speaking?" Demon asked, a little louder.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:42 am

(I just did!)
"I've been awake along time now. I was worried that you had had too much and died." Sun muttered queitly.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:43 am

"That almost happened to me once. You ever been tranked before?" she asked.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:45 am

"I just was and I have been many times before. Never enough to die though." Sun said.
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Post  Thorn on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:48 am

( i hope this is rite)
Raven awke ver sore and cold in a small room by himself but with a srange feeling that some one was watching him.
"you can come out now Brother" Said Raven
" ur gud you no that" said Shadow
Shadow walked over to Raven
"dam chains how are we going to get out of this one hudinie" said Shadow
"come ur my rescuer hurry up AND RESCUE ME!!!" Yelled Raven with a hunt of anger
"... i need to help Demon" he mutterd
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:49 am

"It sucks, huh?" said Demon, for lack of anything better to say.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:51 am

"I'm worried about Moon, she hasn't been tranked much and she hasn't woken up." Sun said nervioudly.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:54 am

"She's in the room too?"
Demon gathered the courage to turn her head on her sore neck.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:55 am

"She's over there." Sun said. I can't see if shes breating.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:14 am

Demon looked over at Moon, wincing as pain shot through her neck. It was hard to determine if she was breathing or not.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:16 am

Moon was alive barely. She stugled to breathe until she fell asleep once more.
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Post  Thorn on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:17 am

'"'RIP'"', '"'BREAK'"'
"GRRRRRRRAAAAAAARRRRRRRR" screamed Raven as they tryed to break the chain
"ITS BUCKING" said Shadow
'"'CLICKCHANK'"' ( o yea onamonapia)
"YES" they said together ass the chain broke.
"now we need to get out of hear we where to noisy" said Raven
at that point the door started to open Shadow jumped back to the shadows and raven fixed the chasin as best he could. a man in white steped in holding a trank
"wat was all that screaming i herd" said whity
"i have a itch and i cant reach it, can you give me a hand" Raven said with a smerk on his face
(O IM THE BEST AT COMIC RELIEF)
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:19 am

Sun was now using all her stregnth to get to Moon. The chains wouldn't break.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:19 am

(Oh you so are.)

Demon thought she heard something. She had really good hearing, better than a normal human's. But she dismissed it. Not much she could do, strapped to a table.
The door opened. A whitecoat walked in.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:22 am

Sun kept quiet. The man walked over to moon. He checked her and unlocked the chains. He took Moon away. Sun couldn't keep quiet. "MY SISTER!" She screamed.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:24 am

Another whitecoat strode in. He didn't bother untying Demon. He just wheeled her whole bed away.
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Post  Thorn on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:27 am

"your a strange one arnt you"said the whity
'see your makeing use of hte gym"
"o yes we are"Raven said with a smerk
"we?" said the whity
"yes we" said Shadow as he lept at the whity in a really cool way
Shadow and Raven walked out of the room leaving the whity unconcise straped to the table
"now to find Demon and the others" Raven said
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:29 am

Sun was all alone now. The whitcoat was standing next to her. He was saying something but she wasn't listning.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:32 am

She tuned into the whitecoat. He said something about escaping and its not possible.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:32 am

Demon was wheeled along a hall, then into an elevator, down into a place where she had never been before. She was taken to a thick metal door.
"It seems some extra lengths of discipline need to be taken with you," was all the whitecoat said before Demon was thrown roughly into the windowless cell and the thick metal door was locked behind her.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:33 am

He spent ages lecturing Sun. She logged out half a minute into it. She thought of what happened if Moon had died.
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Post  Thorn on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:37 am

(o ok i thort u where insulting my cool writeing. and im like HOW DEAR YOU)
Shadow and Raven where running really fast
"we going tyo find her any time noe arnt we?"asked Shadow with that sort of tone in his voice
"nope" Said Raven with a smerk


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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:38 am

Sun was being wheeld out to a new room. She didn't know where she was going. A whitecoat was wheeling her. He told her that her sister was very sick and needs to see her.
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Post  Thorn on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:45 am

"wait the basement" said Raven with an idea.
the ran to the elevator and went down to the basement
they came to a metal door and looked though the hatch
"o hay Demon need a hand" said raven
"RAVEN WHITES ARE COMEING" Said Shadow

( sorry guys but i have to go dont do to much wit out me)
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:47 am

Demon sat alone for ten minutes before even moving. The room was dark, so she took off her sunglasses which had stayed on her face, faithful as they were. The room was still quite dark though.
There were no windows and no furniture. The walls were completely smooth, even the place where the door met its frame was almost completely textureless.
It wasn't particularly big. The roof was low, and the room was small.
How long would they keep her in here?
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:48 am

Sun saw Moon. She struggled. "Whats wrong with her?!" Sun asked. "Shes not taking to well to the Trank." replied the whity.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 21, 2007 7:55 am

Moon was struggling to talk. ".S.is..t.er?" Moon asked.
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Post  Crying Angel on Fri Nov 23, 2007 7:43 am

Seconds ticked by, turning into minutes. Minutes ticked by. Demon didn't know when these minutes would merge into hours. Or if these hours would phase into days.
Demon waited.
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Post  Torn Rose on Fri Nov 23, 2007 7:26 pm

Moon struggled again. They weren,t going to let her go and helpher sister. They wanted to watch her die. "I'll help you Moon!" She yelledbut still wasn't let go.
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Post  Thorn on Sat Nov 24, 2007 10:51 pm

"Deamon you in there"Raven yelled again to Demon
he could faintly see a shadow sitting on the floor
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Post  Crying Angel on Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:28 am

Demon thought she heard something. Her sharp ears strained for any sound.
"Hello?" she asked. Then, realising her voice was far too soft, tried again. "Hello?!"
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Post  Torn Rose on Sun Nov 25, 2007 1:02 am

"Moon!!!" Sun was screaming in the whitys ear. He loosened his grip for a few seconds but then tightened again. Moon faded out...
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Post  Thorn on Tue Nov 27, 2007 3:59 am

Raven herd something down the hall in another room
him and Shadow ran as fast as they could to where the noise was.
"demon you in there" he yelled into the door
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Post  Torn Rose on Tue Nov 27, 2007 4:58 am

Moon woke up in a room she had never seen before. Sun was nowhere to be seen. There were two whitys standing over her. They had some kind of tools in their hands. She felt sore near the stomac. She lifted her hand weakly and put it on her tummy.
There were stiches. They had cut her open and done something to her.
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Post  Crying Angel on Tue Nov 27, 2007 9:20 am

Demon screamed as loudly as she could. "I'm in here! One of the ones at the end!"
There were no windows, not even a small one in the door. Demon could barely even find the door itself. It lay completely flush with the wall.
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Post  Thorn on Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:24 pm

"down there" Raven yelled to Shadow, evan though he was right next to him
"where comeing" Shadow yelled
thet arived at the door where to yelling came from and started to atack it
"on the count of three we will ram it iat the same time" Raven said
"1.....2....3!!!"
they both ramed the dorr and it flew on its hinges inward
"Demon" Raven sore her and ran over
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:05 am

Demon just managed to dodge the door as it slammed inside the small room.
Raven rushed to her side. She gripped his arms.
"We need to leave," she whispered frantically. Her sharp ears could hear footsteps approaching, though they were too far away for the others to hear and weren't coming too fast.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Nov 28, 2007 4:56 am

"Sun?!" Moon cried and saw the whitecoat walk over to the door.

Sun had escaped. She heard noises coming from a tiny room that she new. There was Shadow standing right outside it.
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Post  Crying Angel on Wed Dec 26, 2007 6:00 am

(Curly - I mean Thorn wants me to say that both his charries got tranked. His internet died. So here goes.)
Raven and Shadow found themselves both tranked.
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Post  Torn Rose on Wed Dec 26, 2007 8:56 am

Sun, like the others, was tranked.

Moon looked up to see a whitecoat standing over her only to put her to sleep again.
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